Reading Query Shark again, now that she's back from vacation...

Here's what's new:

<i>I'll be happy if you never use more than one adjective, adverb or metaphor in a paragraph. Tell me who the characters are, what happens to them, and why I should care.</i>

I particularly like this tidbit:

<i>I'll bitch from now till the cats start waltzing around the kitchen with the cows who've come home about punctuation grammar and diction, but I can fix all that, and I WILL, if you've got a great voice.</i>

And here are some words to be wary of in the proposal package:

<So, but, however, would, had, and that.<i>

Thought I'd share...

Jenn